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the sky had bled introverted colors of
reds and purples,
like some drunken painter had decided to
declare his independence.


2.

you kissed her pale pink lips,
and i thought about why you'd love such a
homesick murmur.

3.

the liquor was golden and gleaming
in your rusty
hands,
and your voice after you drank a glass
was grunge and grey and
you were different afterwards.
like someone had lacerated out your heart
from your chest and left it beating in my
hands.


4.

you were combing through the bible like
an unread diary,
and i could see jesus's disapproving face from your
unshaven chin.

5.
you were sinning and
you were also adam and i was eve
and we were both damned to
hell.
completely a work of fiction, so excuse my lack of experience hahah.
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:iconmozartsnemesis:
Any time lovely.
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:iconmozartsnemesis:
Love this poem.

"and i could see jesus's disapproving face from your
unshaven chin."

thought-provoking.. well done.
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:iconunseen-reality:
Unseen-reality Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i appreciate your words, it made my week. thank you beautiful :)
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:iconliving-magikally:
Living-Magikally Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
breath-takingly gorgeous~
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:iconunseen-reality:
Unseen-reality Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart: :rose:
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:iconkaitforest:
this: you kissed her pale pink lips,
and i thought about why you'd love such a
homesick murmur.
and 5. i really love this. it is beautiful
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:iconunseen-reality:
Unseen-reality Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! :heart:
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:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Hello! :wave:

I have used the wonderful title of your piece in poem for The Title Poem project!

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:iconunseen-reality:
Unseen-reality Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
alright, thank you so much for letting me know, I appreciate it! It fits into your poem very well :)
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:icondrippingwords:
DrippingWords Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :huggle: Thanks for not being angry. Thank you! And thanks for creating a title that fit :D
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